Thoughts on Mond

[rune]

Definitely make it interactive, not just pressing ENTER.

Use CLS and/or PRINT AT to display descriptive text at a common place (top of screen?)

Stopping with 5/14 (or any error) message doesn't give a good impression.

Cant comment on the German, but you may have made some errors when using Google translate as some of those German words dont seem to be translated.

Keep trying and have fun.

[Crayon21]

any more suggestions?

[XavSnap]

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10 POKE 16418,18
20 FOR A=0 TO 100
30 PRINT"HELLO ";A
35 SCROLL
36 SCROLL
37 SCROLL
38 SCROLL
39 SCROLL
40 NEXT A

[Dim_75]

nice greatings machine Xav

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10 POKE 16418,18
20 FOR A=0 TO 100
30 PRINT"HELLO ";A
35 SCROLL
36 SCROLL
37 SCROLL
38 SCROLL
39 SCROLL
40 NEXT A

[dr beep]

Downloaded it, but it did'nt start. No time yet to check why not.

Downloadlink is less then 3Kb so how could it be a 48K game?

[Crayon21]

Downloaded it, but it did'nt start. No time yet to check why not.

Downloadlink is less then 3Kb so how could it be a 48K game?

i was foolish. should've switched to 4k at the least. i will redo the game in english